LoneInstrumentalist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJR - When You're Gone]

i'll bow to you n ur girlfriend

as a fellow flute player X], shes quite good on the high n low register, XD it sounds nice, n the strings gave it alota deepth...

1 thing to, the ending (drum?) sounded a bit weird to me for a acc wif the flute :S i kno i cant comment, but there u go, n for some part, the strings is too strong, the flute is just audible

there i go....well great job putting it together ^^

cheerios~

DJRunaway responds:

Wow, thanks man! I'll give the message to hear, I'm sure she'll be thrilled! Thanks for the tips man! If I make anything comperable to this in the future, I'll use your advice for sure!

Greetz,
Runaway

[_-=[Serenity in a rose]=-_]

do mind the low clarity

its because its so subtle, the train traveling past the station overwhelms it :S

but i'v listen to it, its very nice indeed, this must fit in classical, perfectly. Though i dunno how to comment, since its been awhile since i reviewd sumthing like this.

maybe next time, a lil more depth wont hrt, just my opinion, so long as it enhances ur piano, its alllll good X]

cheerios~ good reminder of gentle songs :) (tinks of my lil star XD)

MaestroSorrow responds:

it's a common problem with a lot of my songs, I make them too subtle, and soft.

That will change as well ^^.

Many thanks Lone, for the review ^^.

[_-=[A Kingdom for Alan]=-_]

heya~

just me again? or is this sumthin more then just for a friend? sumthin else? or (i tink) u breaking from all your sorrowful works (which are great all the same) for a change?

its light hearted, like a grand opening, however, i tink it can be granderER, and a bit more richness to it, its as if its lacking something.....i cant quite point out, unfortunately :( sorry there

the melody was very nicely put, n yes, that extra something might just be wat this is waitin for

well, enough from me X] i cant talk anyways

cheerios~ keep composing

MaestroSorrow responds:

Nah, it was actually just for a friend, but I do need to break out of my sorrow songs, before it consumes me and I turn Emo >_<!

It can and will be granderER! I have to expand this and have this one deleted.

[Khuskan - Presto]

i must say

that was refreshing :D, made me wanna get my ass of the chair straight away XD

can u make it a lil longer pwease? so the nice tune can go on a bit ^^

cheerios~ nice theme btw, damn original ^^

Khuskan responds:

i'll see what I can do ;)

[_-=[Waltzing with Madness]=-_]

heh

finally, ur expanding it :p been waitin for an absolute ages X] good thing i stuck wif the hope of u expanding the song :p

finish it, n make more X]
nah, take a break from time to time~ u deserve it :)

oh btw! i hope it aint as short as ballade of drkness X]

cheerios~

MaestroSorrow responds:

heh, I will expand that soon, I figure might as well, just for you then ;).

Thanks for the review Lone.

[_-=[Basking in Dead Light]=-_]

heh

probably just me, but i tink u can realli get distracted from ur title's theme sumtimes X]

ended as if u suddenly remembred it :p

just me~

its great thou :) the intro n ending strings+paino (?) was touchy......

......so *thats* where our heart strings went....into his string orchestra.......... :p

cheerios~ great work ^^

MaestroSorrow responds:

heh, if by that you mean, I COMPLETELY strayed from the original purpose of the title, then I suppose you're right.

But I didn't intitially want this to be a soft song, the person basking in the moon's dead light, grows angry by seeing the destruction, and thats what makes the song hyper.

I guess I just threw in too much without first considering a well placed name ^^.

Thanks for the review.

[This is Freedom]

neat :)

that repetivness realli sets the tune out ^^ great work, n keep it up *warm smile*:)

i cant say much X] its good, dats all i kno

keep it up~

n as usual:
cheerios~

MilkMan-Dan responds:

Thanks mate as usual... good your still kicken around and reviewin my work. It's great to have people like you.

[Four Seasons of Adventure]

:) lets pack our bags n go now!

that was very true to the title ^^ suited it perfectly :)

well, hard to comment on masterpieces X] so i'll leave it there,

btw, loved the bass wif the high piano ^^sets the clock ticking~
n the way its connected awed me ^^ the phrases r very captivating ^^

good work~, keep it up :)

cheerios~

MilkMan-Dan responds:

Thanks buddy... a plethora of extravegant vocabulary and a flattering review. Thanks :).

[Prelude-Fantasy for Piano]

cute :)

very nice tune there, so cute ^^
got alota moods in it tooo
*grumbls: stupid...down voting...son of a.....*

just 1 thing thou
there are sum rough transitions there, smooth that out, n this will shine :)

that is all my friend ^^ happy composing!

cheerios~keep it up, its good

Scarlatti responds:

*grumbls: stupid...down voting...son of a.....*

Damn right. It gets so bad sometimes. This piece was loved by my composition teacher, as well as the dean who conducted my jury. Of course, that was live. Whateva. I know it's better than 2.70 (as of 6-4-06).

Thank you for taking the time and the energy to listen to, think over, and review my piece. It's something very few people have the patience for, I gather. Thanks.

[Insane Pain]

hmm, ur right X]

this is alot better X], but then again, all ur pieces r near perfect....(we're only human afterall)

love the feel, just found the ending a lil off for this :S dunno...........im a quiet newb X], do mind me

lastly, keep up ur work! u hav set us a high standard/expectation X] *thumbs up

cheerios~ happy composing~!

MilkMan-Dan responds:

I vow to make a perfect piece then. Your no newb... you know what u like and that's good enough. Thanks for the great review.